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More and more people are buying fashionable clothes these days. Does it have more negative or positive effects? Give reasons.

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Fashion
 plays a major role in
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contemporary
contemparary
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 world. There is an increasing trend in people spending more money on clothing. The notion
further
 proved when analyzed the incremental growth of the world's
fashion
 industry over the
last
 decade. In my opinion, the said trend has both good and adverse implications. The
outter
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outer
 appearance plays a key role in
personality
 development,
currently
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 most of the big organizations are conducting separate personal grooming sessions
to
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 their newly recruited employees because employers have now identified the true value of it for
the
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personality
 development. The right
dresscode
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dress code
 is a crucial tool in
business
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the business
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 world where it would help a
person
 to create a good
first
 impression.
On the contrary
, too much spending on
fashion
 could lead a
person
 towards
poor
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 financial position.
moreover
, higher concern on
outter
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outer
apperarance
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appearance
 would trap a
person
 on a
never ending
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 obsession to
immitate
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imitate
 others especially the
celebreties
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celebrities
.
This
 could lead to a situation where one would not attain
self satisfaction
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 by any means. The worst part is that some people
are often end
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 up with unsuitable
fashion
 to them that would destroy their
personality
. In conclusion, people spending on
fashion
 is a positive trend, yet, one should understand their limits in relation to the spending capacity.
This
 balanced approach will help a
person
 to be a pleasing
personality
.
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