ALL CHILDREN SHOULD BE MADE TO WEAR SCHOOL UNIFORM. TO WHAT EXTENT DO YOU AGREE OR DISAGREE.

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Education is the process of learning,

acquiring

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knowledge and skills to an individual's character. Institutions have made rules for the students to be in proper dress code. I support that wearing educational attire has certain advantages like youngsters could impart discipline and improve their safety

although

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it has

few

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cons

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uncomfortability

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the uncomfortability

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and dullness

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the same outfit for the entire period.

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essay shall discuss why I am holding

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view. On the one side,

academy going

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children need to be dressed in a predefined set of

costume

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costumes

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Uniform

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Uniforms

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will provide the identification of a child to a particular alma mater

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it helps to bring stability in their life for their future development.

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, if a student

lost

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from school can be easily traced through the uniform and helps to inform the respective academy.

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, dressing in a specific outfit enhances the security

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safety

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of a child.

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, wearing the very same attire for the entire school life has its own repercussions. It could cause discomfort in daily activity which

bring

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down the excitement

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lack

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a lack

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of creativity in costume design especially in the case of teenagers.

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, students need to wear the same apparel in all weather conditions which

make

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makes

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them uncomfortable and uneasy on a few occasions.

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, mandating rules and

regulation

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regulations

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regarding dress

code

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is not advisable under specific circumstances.

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, a student in a fixed uniform has its own pros and cons but because of the safety concern and implementation of discipline, a student in a dress code during their high school journey study will be excited and memorable.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

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Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

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Grammatical Range: 4.0

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Task Achievement: 6.0

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ALL CHILDREN SHOULD BE MADE TO WEAR SCHOOL UNIFORM. TO WHAT EXTENT DO YOU AGREE OR DISAGREE.

Children usually want to play the same games and watch the same tv programs as their friends. Should Parents allow it or not? Give your opinion and examples from your experience.

Some think they can use as much fresh water as they want, but others say governments should limit water use because it is not endless. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

While many advocate for the necessity of obtaining a higher education, others argue that it is not essential for success in today’s diverse job market. Discuss both views regarding the necessity of higher education and give your opinion.

The current trend in education is to move away from traditional exams and instead have continuous assignments over the school year. What do you think of this trend?