Some People Think that large international sporting events only bring drawbacks and that it is not worth hosting them. Do you agree or disagree?

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the
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predominant
part of economic growth. Many masses argue that host international sporting
events
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some problems. In my opinion, I
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will discuss my views in
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multifarious
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reason
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positive
develoment
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development
through
sports
event. It helps the growth
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economic
condition of
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.
In other words
, when any holistic development
country
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organize
events
and give the revenue and ads on social media.
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to watch
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because of
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,
events
earn big profit and strong their condition.
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, one decade ago
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had
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a vast
sports
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country
and around 7 million people went to the event platform where it
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for watching as well as earned
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million pond surplus.
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,
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the best way to
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for
extend
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their fund condition.
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, Every nation region
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to physical
activites
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activities
games destination.Due to
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, many masses can get work. To illustrate,
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organization
events
work require long-time and
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wanes for
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long-term
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and
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can earn
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amount of money. To Examplify, in the whole
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some
country
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not fully developed and have not much currency
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mitigate
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.
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, a lot of people can get work with the help of
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organization
events
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economy
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as well as it
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to
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adoloscents
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adolescents
towards the games
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