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Whether or not it is advantageous or disadvantageous to study at private schools which is heated debate. I am convinced with bring both benefits and drawbacks by students. One the one hand, stuuudying at those schools is beneficial to students in two major ways.

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Whether or not it is advantageous or disadvantageous to study at private
schools
 is a heated debate. I am convinced with bring both benefits and drawbacks by
students
. On the one hand, studying at those
schools
 is beneficial to
students
 in two major ways. In the
first
 place, private
schools
 often do well furnished and equipped with modern facilities.
Thus
,
students
 have the chance to practical experiments
such
 as modern labs, media rooms and more reliable academic outcomes.
Moreover
, private
schools
 would provide
students
 with international studying environments. As a master fact,
students
 have daily interaction with international
students
 as well as various cultures and customs.
Therefore
, they can improve their foreign languages
in particular
 and communication skills in general
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