You are interested in enrolling in a cooking class at a local college and would like a friend to come with you. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter • say where and when the class will be held • give reasons why you think your friend might be interested • suggest a time and place to meet to discuss the idea Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear…

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Dear Anita I hope you have had a great time. I am writing to inform you about my idea to enrol in a cooking class in our local college. I wish if you could join me in

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. I believe there are many amazing items that encourage you to have

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with me.

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will be held on the weekends in the late afternoon around 5 pm and it takes only one hour. The location of the class is near the tennis court where we had our training

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week. I remember

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you told me it is great if you have training at the

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as you are bored and want to do something.

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has some benefits for you.

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, it helps you to find your favourite job in a restaurant as you need it to have some

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for your upcoming University

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, you can fill your free time during the

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and would not get bored again.

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, we can catch up more and we can make some plans for our near future business. It would be great if we can meet each other

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in the morning at 9 am in our favourite coffee shop to talk about

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and sharing our ideas.

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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

216 words

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