People who cause their own illnesses through unhealthy lifestyle and poor diets should have to pay more for health care. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

A vast majority of people around the world don't pay enough attention to their nutrition and lifestyle. And, of course, it often leads to unwanted consequences as different health problems that need to be solved. There are contradictory opinions regarding
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source of healthcare. As for me, I strongly believe that every person should be
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responsible for illnesses
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are the result of inappropriate behaviour.
First
of all, it motivates both men and women to exclude as
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bad habits as they can to save their money. It is absolutely obvious that citizens who don't worry about their own condition and needs of the organism should pay
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charge for medical insurance.
For example
, in some
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medical companies require patients to notify if they have particular bad habits
such
as smoking, alcohol abuse, lack of exercise and others. And the more they have the more they force to pay.
Thus
, it would decrease
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desire to buy harmful products or to smoke and make them
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be more physically active.
Secondly
, it would save state resources for treating individuals with heavy
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which were not caused by their activities. The main task of government is to provide
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basic healthcare and make it accessible to everyone. As we know,
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advanced medical and surgical treatments are very expensive.
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, sometimes we need to raise money for seriously ill people
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because federal or local budgets lack to allocate funds for that purpose.
Accordingly
, if authorities stop spending savings for individuals which sicknesses are their own faults, it will be sufficient resources for those who don’t provoke any
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and suffer without therapy support. To summarize, after analysing the above, it can be concluded that only
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choice to protect himself from sickness determines a degree of financial accountability. And what is
also
important, the prevention of health problems and illnesses is more necessary than treatment.
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