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Some parents buy their children a large number of toys to play with. What are the advantages and disadvantages for the child of having a large number of toys?

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children
 get numerous
toys
 from their
parents
 to play with.
This
 essay discusses the merits and demerits of
of
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having a more number of
toys
 for a
child
. on the one hand,some fathers and mothers buy an excess number of
toys
 for their
child
.
This
 is seen in
parents
 because they express their love towards their
child
 by gifting more
number of
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toys
.
As a result
, a
child
 can have fun and joy by playing with
toys
.
Moreover
, it makes the kid
to
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play without depending on any other
child
,and
also
 by playing with some
toys
 like remote cars ,makes the
child
to
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enhance his mental abilities.Most of the
children
 are stressed because of the schools,so after coming to the home,spending time with
toys
 makes them stress relief.Nowadays,as obesity is seen in
children
also
,few
parents
 buy a small bicycle as a toy ,so that
child
 can lose calories.
on the other hand
,By gifting
toys
 to the
child
 can lead to some demerits as well.some
children
 play
large
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 amount of time with their
toys
 which is not good for their studies.By playing with
toys
children
 neglect outdoor sports which are bad for their health. By playing with
toys
 continuously,the
child
 loses the chance of interacting with another
child
 ,so
as a result
child
 communication skills will be declined.To illustrate,In times Magzine it is reported that
children
 who play with
toys
 continuously ,show poor speaking skills.
In addition
,By having numerous
toys
, the
child
 does not know the value of money.Few
parents
 buy
toys
 for their
child
 in order to not make noise and
this
 makes the
child
to
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take advantage of it,which is not good in the long run. To conclude,Having numerous
toys
 with the
child
 is very useful ,but at the same
time
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 demerits should not be underestimated.
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