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People often think about creating an ideal society, but most of the times fail in making this happen. What is your opinion about an ideal society ? How can we create an ideal society?

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Historically,
people
 have been trying to build a better community and a residence, and they have made lots of mistakes. In
this
 essay, I am going to examine
two
 main reasons why creating an ideal
society
 is never realized, discuss possible ways to achieve developing the best
city
.
To begin
 with, there are
two
 reasons why
people
 continue to fail to make the ideal
city
.
Firstly
, all human beings have different definitions of "ideal
city
".
For instance
, before the French revolution, the
society
 was ideal for the nobility, despite the working class was in serious poverty.
Thus
, the French revolution was a tool place, and the working class tried to create an ideal world for them.
Furthermore
, the definition of "ideal
city
" changes as time goes by. Take the Edo era in Japan,
for example
, the government continued a policy of seclusion for around 150 years, and the
society
 flourished during the period.
However
, the outside world was changed and the Edo government was recognized as obsoleteness. I believe that there are
two
 possible ways to creating the ideal
city
. The
first
 solution is to try to create a better
city
 for everyone, not the best
city
. It is almost impossible to define the best and ideal
city
 for everyone since
people
 all have different backgrounds that impact one's tastes.
Hence
, the more realistic solutions are to aim for a better
city
 for every
society
 members, by building new hospitals and expanding public transportations. Another possible solution is that standardize
people
's definition of "ideal
city
". It may be not effective,
however
, marketing strategies play a significant role to create common senses among citizens. To conclude, there are
two
 possible reasons behind the difficulty of creating the ideal
city
, which is that
people
 all have different idea toward "ideal", and the definition changes as time goes by. To solve
this
 problem, creating a better
city
 may play a role in the solution, and marketing strategies will help it.
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