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split opinion regarding nutrimental
food
. It has been argued that
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regime rules and regulation for nutritious
food
within a country would enhance a good and
lifestyle for
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being. While, other
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of
people
think, it up to individuals to determine how they want to live their lives.
Health
, in my
, primarily
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also
, the
government
has
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of other
for encouraging citizens to
life.
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On the one hand , a group of intellectuals assert that
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administration have to make some laws for the most nutritious foods. It is not a neglectable
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fact that
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healthy diet is good for our body to maintain a healthy metabolic rate along with some other benefits.
For example
, a few decades ago one law was passed for good
health
that prohibits activities that
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detrimental effects on life
such
as, drug, alcohol, and smoking are prohibited for certain countries together with few states.
In addition
in few countries
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levies heavy taxes on fast
food
in order to discourage
people
from eating it.
Hence
, these strategies can have positive effects on an individuals
health
.
On the other hand
, many
people
believe they should be responsible for their
food
and drink decisions
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because personal freedom is their fundamental right.
For instance
, we are living in a world where we have independence and privilege to do want we want in case if the
government
restrict
people
's choices even though that would be for the betterment of
people
, that would lead to public concerns
such
as protest or marches. A better solution for
this
would be to educate
people
about a
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diet which would enable
people
to make better
food
choices.
This
technique would use in
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of developing countries around the world with a positive result in terms of public
health
.
To conclude, considering above mentioned points it is evident that, balanced diet is the most appropriate way to deal with
this
situation. In my opinion,
health
decisions should of citizens as everyone has the rights to live their life
accordingly
;
however
,
instead
of enforcing the rules on the citizens the
government
must check the quality of
food
and impose the law on manufacturing of these products.