Some people think that public health within a country can be improved by government making laws regarding nutritious food. Others, however, think that health is a matter of personal choice and responsibility. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
There
are
split opinion regarding nutrimental Change the verb form
is
food
. It has been argued that,
regime rules and regulation for nutritious Remove the comma
apply
food
within a country would enhance a good and healtheir
lifestyle for Correct your spelling
healthier
human
being. While, other Add an article
a human
the human
group
of Change the wording
groups
people
think, it up to individuals to determine how they want to live their lives. Health
, in my prespective
, primarily Correct your spelling
perspective
a personal obligations
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a personal obligation
personal obligations
also
, the government
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of other Add an article
a number
oprions
for encouraging citizens to Correct your spelling
options
healtheir
life. Correct your spelling
healthier
This
essay will substantiate views in the following paragraph with relevant examples.
On the one hand , a group of intellectuals assert that,
administration have to make some laws for the most nutritious foods. It is not a neglectable Remove the comma
apply
the
fact that Correct article usage
apply
the
healthy diet is good for our body to maintain a healthy metabolic rate along with some other benefits. Correct article usage
a
For example
, a few decades ago one law was passed for good health
that prohibits activities that has
detrimental effects on life Change the verb form
have
such
as, drug, alcohol, and smoking are prohibited for certain countries together with few states. In addition
in few countries government
levies heavy taxes on fast Correct article usage
the government
food
in order to discourage people
from eating it. Hence
, these strategies can have positive effects on an individuals health
.
On the other hand
, many people
believe they should be responsible for their food
and drink decisions,
because personal freedom is their fundamental right. Remove the comma
apply
For instance
, we are living in a world where we have independence and privilege to do want we want in case if the government
restrict people
's choices even though that would be for the betterment of people
, that would lead to public concerns such
as protest or marches. A better solution for this
would be to educate people
about a Change the verb form
balanced
balance
diet which would enable Correct your spelling
balanced
people
to make better food
choices. This
technique would use in number
of developing countries around the world with a positive result in terms of public Change the article
a number
the number
health
.
To conclude, considering above mentioned points it is evident that, balanced diet is the most appropriate way to deal with this
situation. In my opinion, health
decisions should of citizens as everyone has the rights to live their life accordingly
; however
, instead
of enforcing the rules on the citizens the government
must check the quality of food
and impose the law on manufacturing of these products.Submitted by ankitacommon on
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