You recently celebrated a special occasion in your personal life and received a card and a present from your colleagues at work. Write a letter to your colleagues. In your letter remind your colleagues what the special occasion you were celebrating was thank them for the card and gift explain why you like the gift and how you will use it

#occasion #life #card #colleagues #work #gift

Dear Colleagues, I hope

this

letter finds everyone well. I am writing

this

letter to remind you of some good memories we had together

last

year and

also

to say thank you for the wonderful gift that you presented me. As I arranged a small get-together party on the occasion of my 10th wedding anniversary in my home, we had a beautiful day. I did not expect any of you, but to my surprise, you all came and wished me.

Furthermore

, it gave me so many memorable moments together.

In addition

, you all presented a

card

and a gift, there are no words to explain my happiness for the

card

and the American Tie. The

card

is outstanding with a group photo on top of it and a photo of mine with my wife inside is really great. I can surely say that

this

is the best

card

ever I had in my life. Especially, the American Tie is too good to see and luxurious to wear. I am very much impressed with the tie and whenever I wear it I will get so many compliments from the people around which will reminds you all. I am eagerly waiting to meet you all after

this

lockdown as we did not meet each other for 1 year. Yours faithfully, Sravani Gangireddy.

Submitted by gouni.prashanthreddy on Wed Jun 02 2021

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I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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5Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Grammar mistakes
 

8 paragraphs

220 words

8.00

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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