Traffic condition is becoming increasing problematic in major cities. What solution can you suggest to help solve the problem.

In
this
contemporary era ,the rise of
traffic
in capital cities is causing many dilemmas throughout the streets ,
although
this
problem
has been to exists since the past ,but , modernly it has increased for several reasons one of which is the
increase
in population ,
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however
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this
problem
has many solutions like by taking a train or bus rather than a
car
.
first
of all , cars are very useful
transportation
for individuals throughout their day and have been since it was created despite that , the
increase
in population and the need for every individual a
transportation
vehicle
such
as a
car
,it had increased too .If most of the individuals bought a
car
,the streets would be filled ,
moreover
, it will cause
traffic
which will lead to many problems
such
as the
increase
in gasoline prices ,take a lot of time from persons day and even could unstable the
countries
economy,
for example
, in Jordan, most of the people own a
car
and by the time
this
caused the gasoline price to rise which led to a huge disturbance in
traffic
and that resulted in an economic crisis in the country.
however
,
traffic
has been a dramatical
problem
,
therefore
,big
countries
have come up with many solutions, which
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agree with and
that is
creating other
transportation
ways
such
as trains , busses , and even creating a private path in streets for bicycles ,
for instance
,
this
helps people to get to their work , home or school faster and more efficient ,
for example
, London is popular with the underground trains it owns and bicycle paths ,
in addition
,other
countries
are learning from them
such
as Saudi Arabia, before about 6 years it started building a metro and busses chain throughout Riyadh city. in conclusion ,
traffic
dilemma has been a
problem
for a long time but as the significant
increase
in the world's population recently,
therefore
,
countries
with big cities need to build
transportation
to replace the cars
such
as trains and busses.
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