Traffic condition is becoming increasing problematic in major cities. What solution can you suggest to help solve the problem.

In

this

contemporary era ,the rise of

traffic

in capital cities is causing many dilemmas throughout the streets ,

although

this

problem

has been to exists since the past ,but , modernly it has increased for several reasons one of which is the

increase

in population ,

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this

problem

has many solutions like by taking a train or bus rather than a

car

.

first

of all , cars are very useful

transportation

for individuals throughout their day and have been since it was created despite that , the

increase

in population and the need for every individual a

transportation

vehicle

such

as a

car

,it had increased too .If most of the individuals bought a

car

,the streets would be filled ,

moreover

, it will cause

traffic

which will lead to many problems

such

as the

increase

in gasoline prices ,take a lot of time from persons day and even could unstable the

countries

economy,

for example

, in Jordan, most of the people own a

car

and by the time

this

caused the gasoline price to rise which led to a huge disturbance in

traffic

and that resulted in an economic crisis in the country.

however

,

traffic

has been a dramatical

problem

,

therefore

,big

countries

have come up with many solutions, which

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agree with and

that is

creating other

transportation

ways

such

as trains , busses , and even creating a private path in streets for bicycles ,

for instance

,

this

helps people to get to their work , home or school faster and more efficient ,

for example

, London is popular with the underground trains it owns and bicycle paths ,

in addition

,other

countries

are learning from them

such

as Saudi Arabia, before about 6 years it started building a metro and busses chain throughout Riyadh city. in conclusion ,

traffic

dilemma has been a

problem

for a long time but as the significant

increase

in the world's population recently,

therefore

,

countries

with big cities need to build

transportation

to replace the cars

such

as trains and busses.