Human activity has had a negative effect on ecosystems, animals and plants across the world. Some people believe this cannot be changed while others feel that we can still take action to protect living things and the environment. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

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Human beings have had a damaging impact on the
environment
and all living things on our planet. In
this
essay, I will discuss both sides of public opinion to helping or not helping protect the
environment
further
.
Firstly
, I will discuss why
people
feel they can no longer help living things and their local
environment
, and
secondly
, I will explore what action
people
are taking to benefit the natural world. Many
people
feel that they can no longer help the
environment
due to rapidly developing economies. Many of these countries that are becoming industrialised rely on factories to produce and create goods.
For example
, some Asian countries produce many goods for the west, which in turn creates pollution but
also
jobs for poorer
people
. Another reason
people
feel helpless to help the earth is due to rising population levels. It is difficult to say whether we can sustain
such
huge numbers of inhabitants on our planet. It takes a lot of energy to produce food, and it may be that we are already too high populated to feed everyone.
On the other hand
, there are many
people
who feel we can still help our
environment
by using technology
such
as solar power. Solar power is a renewable energy that has no negative effect on the natural world.
For example
, if we could use more renewable energies, we could provide power and electricity for more
people
without hurting the
environment
. Many countries are
also
now banning the use of plastic bags,
such
as India.
Consequently
, India’s cities and local wildlife have become healthier and cleaner. It is clear to see that we are facing many challenges in protecting the
environment
in our modern world. In my opinion, I feel very strongly about ensuring the safety and wellbeing of our planet, and feel that governments worldwide should make
this
their top priority
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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