Nowadays in many countries, the proportion of the older population is higher than that of younger people. Is it a positive or negative development?

Around the world, there are multiple
people
who migrate from their own to another
country
which has resulted in an imbalance in the ratio of population. There are many countries where there are more aged
people
than young ones. According to
me
Correct pronoun usage
my
show examples
,
this
is a negative development and
this
essay will delve into the consequences caused by
this
.
Firstly
, in a
country
where there are more old
people
the scope of development will narrow down as they wouldn’t be interested in it or the government wouldn’t invest much as there would be
less
Change the quantifier
fewer
show examples
benefits.
Moreover
, it will eventually result in
bad
Add an article
a bad
the bad
show examples
economy and no availability of good or average facilities.
For instance
, if I leave my parents and move to a different
country
, I will be investing and benefiting migrated
country
not my
home land
Correct your spelling
homeland
show examples
.
Secondly
, in scenarios where
older
Add an article
the older
show examples
community are
more
Add a comma
,more
show examples
there are fewer
people
who can help them with proper care and basic needs.
Also
,
this
imbalance results in various medical issues
such
as depression, insomnia, etc as there are many folks who don’t have
Correct your spelling
anyone
show examples
any one
Correct your spelling
anyone
show examples
to share or talk to.
For example
, in a village in Punjab, India there were multiple cases of depression in aged
people
as there was no one they could meet or talk to. In conclusion, if there is no proper balance maintained in the ratio of old and young
people
’s population there would be an immense decrease in the economy of the
provience
Correct your spelling
province
and will eventually result in various medical issues for
older
Add an article
the older
an older
show examples
generation.
Submitted by sehgalricha54 on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

What to do next:
Look at other essays: