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In some countries owing a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might this be the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?

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In some
countries
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 people preferred to own personal property rather than abide in
rented
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a rented
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 apartment. Living in own house gives the feeling of satisfaction and security. In my opinion, having
own
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 flat is beneficial.
First
 and foremost, having personal property gives stability in life.
This
 is because when a person has his/her personal accommodation, he/she and his/her family do not have to move from one place to another, like in the case of renting.
Although
, dwellers have to take loan and mortgage to buy their own building. In Egypt,
for example
, citizens can borrow money from banks to buy their house.
Thus
, that might be the reason for
necessity
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the necessity
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 of residence ownership.
Nonetheless
,
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owning
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owing
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owning
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 an apartment is a positive situation.
Additionally
, personal residence not only provides comfort, but folks can
also
 invest their
hard earned
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 money in
good
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 manner.
Then
 there are cases where individuals bought
own
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their own
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 dwellings and paid the price in instalments by doing they invest their funds in
better
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the better
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 deal as well as they have the freedom of living their lives as they want. To illustrate, when I was a tenant neither I have
authority
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the authority
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 to move a single thing from its place to another nor capable to renovate the home.
Hence
, having own mansion has its clear advantages. In conclusion, the desire
of
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for
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 stable and comfortable life is the chief consequence
for
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of
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 having
personal
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a personal
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 house rather
then
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than
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 staying as a paying guest. I do believe that
this
 is beneficial as
person
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the person
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 get his own shelter in return
of
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for
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 the investments.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • ownership
  • renting
  • importance
  • sense of security
  • stability
  • financial investment
  • asset
  • customize
  • decorate
  • belonging
  • community
  • potential
  • future generations
  • long-term
  • cost advantage
  • control
  • living space
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