Some commentators feel that grandparents should live together with their children and grandchildren, while others say that elderly people should be encouraged to live independently. Consider the possible arguments on both sides of this debate, and reach your own conclusion.

It is frequently asserted that elderly people ought to live with their extended family, rather than they have to live self-reliant. There are arguments on both sides of
this
very topical debate, which I will discuss now. On the one hand, those who support the idea of
grandparents
spend their time with their children and grandchildren are the best measure point to the fact that it is able to bring happiness at the end of their life.
For instance
,
ancient
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couple
become
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single when their partner dies
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is why they really need
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promotional support from relations.
Moreover
, it appears to be true that they often have a
healthy
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problem at their age.
Therefore
, we ought to live together to take care of
themselves
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easier.
By contrast
, supporters of
grandparents
living independently often state that youngsters have no time available for
grandparents
.
For example
, it seems to be true that these day youngsters are up to their ears in work as well as study
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this
reason take care of elderly members is out of the question. A
further
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a variety of elderly prefer to live on their own because they are possible to enjoy their life more independent and they do not desire to disturb their others family members. To sum up, it appears to me that the stronger argument is in favour of
grandparents
should live with their children and grandchildren.
This
is provided that we should foster to live self-reliant in an extended house.
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