Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Nowadays, every
job
have
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a different kind of difficulty
such
as low
salary
, long working hour.
Although
some
people
think that it is okay to continue to
work
in a bad situation and struggling, others believe that they should find a new
job
which is better than the current
job
. I will discuss both views and I strongly believe that
people
should find a new
job
when they are struggling and difficult situation in a current
job
. On the one hand, some
people
do not want to improve in their
work
and they keep working with difficult problems in their
company
. Some
people
afraid that there have difficulties
to find
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finding
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new
work
and time to settle in a new
company
if they resign from the current
company
which is dealing with problems. My friend is working at an IT
company
,
for example
, he has to
work
until 10PM every day and there is
only
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an only
the only
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one-off
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day in a month.
Therefore
, he would like to quit
from
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the
company
, but he is still working in
this
company
because
he
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ishe
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afraid that he could not able to find a new
job
after resigning from
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current
work
. In conclusion,
people
do not change the
job
even in the difficult situation because of their fearfulness.
On the other hand
, many
people
are trying to improve themselves regardless of difficulties in
work
. In fact, many
people
want to get a comfortable
job
and a high
salary
.
For instance
, when
people
are occasionally struggling at
work
, they are always finding new jobs which are
comfort
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and high income. Many
people
believe that their lifestyle will improve if they have comfortable
work
and a high
salary
.
Moreover
, they could get away from stresses related to
work
.
Thus
,
people
should always find a way to improve their
work
and comfy when encountering difficulties at
work
. In conclusion,
people
should find a way to solve the problems at
work
or they should find a better
job
which can give a better lifestyle and a high
salary
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • adversity
  • resilience
  • stoicism
  • contentment
  • cope
  • adapt
  • endure
  • persevere
  • settle
  • ambition
  • tenacious
  • determined
  • resourceful
  • optimistic
  • self-improvement
  • proactive
  • initiative
  • transform
  • overcome
  • confront
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