Even though doctors all over the world agree that fast food is bad for people's health, more and more people are eating it. Why are more people eating fast food? What can be done about this problem?

Food
is one of the most important sources of energy for the human body. In
this
modern era,
food
also
evolved with humans. People like different types of tastes in their
food
and fast
food
fills that gap in the daily intact of
food
. Due to these daily fast
food
habits, people's health is getting compromised day by day. Even doctors suggest that we have to stop or control ourselves eating junk
food
but we do not follow that.
To begin
with, junk
food
gives you a variety of taste which everyone likes to eat. These type of foods are cheaper in price and we will get a good amount of quantity as well, But there is no quality in it.
For example
, one
medium sized
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pizza will cost you only $5 and one person easily able to eat. It
also
has
good
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taste and the most important thing is we don't have to cook it ourselves. You just have to order it and you will get your
food
,
this
will save your time for cooking.
On the other hand
, homemade foods are much healthier than outside
food
. We can cook our
food
with fresh vegetables
instead
of frozen. Fresh vegetables have more vitamins and minerals which our body required to improve our health. Yes, it will take time to cook but you will get good quality
food
and
also
you can adjust your taste by adding some natural herbs and spices rather than artificial
food
colours and herbs/chemical for the test. In conclusion, I like to suggest that we have to start cooking
food
at their home.
This
home-cooked
food
helps you to improve your immunity to fight against sickness or viruses.
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