In Britain, when someone gets old they often go to live in a home with other old people where there are nurses to look after them. Sometimes the government has to pay for this care. Who do you think should pay for this care, the government or the family? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience

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with the breakthrough age need more supervision and

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than others. In some cases and

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the family is responsible for

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other situations, the

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responsible for it.

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essay, I will examine those reasons, as well as give my opinion.

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pay for

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is because it is responsible

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and the

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. During the active life, adulthood,

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work very much to produce and move the economy of the country, making money and paying interest, fee and other payments in order to improve

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aspects of the country. The

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gets along with the productivity of the active

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, once that

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, the family could be absent in pay for the

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with the elderly. I firmly believe that some families have no condition to take

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elderly according to the real needs.

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would be another reason to promote my view. Some families have no time and enough money to assist these experienced

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, the

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can be neglected, damage

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and sometimes resulting in an increase in the costs to ensure

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way, to promote the better

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of retirees after years in productivity, they could be live in a specific place, paid by

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, with expertise nurses to help them. For these arguments, I agree that the

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should pay for the costs of

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for elderly

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in nurseries home. As well as the

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should ensure comfort and well-being.