It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong from an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn to distinction. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion. What sort of punishment should parents and teachers be allowed to teach children good behavior.
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between them, I completely agree with Correct article usage
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punishment
being necessary within the process of education about what is right good and what is wrong.
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know doing bad things costs. Use synonyms
For example
, some spoiled boys like to make noises in restaurants or at a library, they indeed bother others except themselves. If there are no limitations on Linking Words
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, they will not realize how unacceptable what that they have done is, so the same wrong they will make again and again.
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, the best way to punish should cover two main aspects. Linking Words
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as forbidding watching TV, going to the park as methods for penalizing them. The other is exact rules that mean the supervisors should tell Linking Words
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