It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong from an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn to distinction. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion. What sort of punishment should parents and teachers be allowed to teach children good behavior.

It is true that
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are at an early age cannot distinguish clearly what is good or bad behaviour. So, to help
kids
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between them, I completely agree with
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being necessary within the process of education about what is right good and what is wrong. There are several reasons why making
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certain measures for
children
can effectively discipline
children
in their behaviours.
Furthermore
, the function of
punishment
is to let young
kids
know doing bad things costs.
For example
, some spoiled boys like to make noises in restaurants or at a library, they indeed bother others except themselves. If there are no limitations on
kids
, they will not realize how unacceptable what that they have done is, so the same wrong they will make again and again. With regards to what kind of
punishment
should be used by family and schools.
First
of all, I oppose all forms of physical harms to a child’s
children
’s body, as well as shouting at them. They are all bad disciplinary methods
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kids
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illnesses and physical injures.
Therefore
, the best way to punish should cover two main aspects.
Firstly
, is that for proper punishments, supervisors can reduce the
children
’s entertainment activities
such
as forbidding watching TV, going to the park as methods for penalizing them. The other is exact rules that mean the supervisors should tell
children
what will happen if they disobey the right rules and do not comply with regulations as previously mentioned,
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a warning. In conclusion, my view is that
punishment
for misbehaviour plays an important role in a child’s upbringing and
moreover
establishes the boundaries of what the right and wrong actions are, but
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should not harm
children
in any physical or mental way.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Moral development
  • Positive reinforcement
  • Negative reinforcement
  • Behavioral psychology
  • Disciplinary methods
  • Corporal punishment
  • Psychological effects
  • Authoritative parenting
  • Permissive parenting
  • Behavioural correction
  • Ethical considerations
  • Legal frameworks
  • Cognitive development
  • Social norms
  • Character building
  • Restorative practices
  • Authoritarian approach
  • Constructive criticism
  • Pro-social behavior
  • Conditioning
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