Most people are not interested in how their food has been produced. They only care about how much it costs. How true is this statement? What influences people when they buy food?

As a matter of fact “Money speak
any where
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”. So, a large number of
people
focus on the price of goods
such
as
foods
,
instead
of their
quality
. I totally agree with
this
opinion, and in the following essay, I will bring a few reasons. The amount of money which are used to buying
foods
, consume a great portion
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income.
Consequently
, family members have to
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focus
on the price of them,
instead
of their production processes. In
fact
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thight
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tight
high
quality
control of
foods
, which are made them healthier, could
increased
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increase
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their final
prices
. So, many
people
keen to buy
foods
with reasonable
prices
to eliminate their hunger and get energy, but
procceses
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processes
of them and their
quality
are not located in their priorities. The
prices
of
foods
are not the only factor which
are
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influnced
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influenced
people
interests.
Although
the affordable
prices
have significant effects on
costumers
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customers
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,
advertaisments
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advertisements
and
qulaity
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quality
of packaging are
another
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other
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important factors with a great
influnce
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influence
on
people
.
In other words
, many
people
buy things if those are
katched
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matched
patched
hatched
by their eyes. It means professional
advertaisment
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advertisement
with
high
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quality
pakage
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package
, make some
foods
more desirable than others. So, a bunch number of
people
might
presuaded
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persuaded
persuade
to buy those
foods
. To sum up,
although
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processes
proccesses
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the proccesses
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of making
foods
are very important
espicially
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especially
in human healths, a lot of
people
have neglected it due to economic reasons or
as a result
of
advertaisements
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advertisements
. These conditions may
threathen
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threaten
public health and in my
opinion
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the government have to
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manage
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mange
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manage
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both of them by social laws.
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