Car ownership has increased so rapidly over the past thirty years that many cities in the world are now 'one big traffic jam'. How true do you think this statement is? What measures can governments take to discourage people from using their cars?

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of cars
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increasing in several cities of the world in
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to the
last
three decades which is a major cause of
traffic
jam issues.
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,
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believe that
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it can be
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awful condition for all
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humans. Steps which should
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by
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to reduce
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is mentioned in
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paragraphs. Nowadays,
population
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is rapidly increasing in several countries.
Therefore
, the number of vehicles
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also
rising. In many homes, every people have a separate vehicle.
In addition
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their time citizen afford to travel with their own vehicle
instead
of public transports. Because of that reason, in rush hours like morning and
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people are suffering
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long distances
traffic
jams.
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the contrary, to solve
this
problem the government should take steps in
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way. There are several ways for government to reduce
this
problem.
Firstly
, they should decide on a limit for vehicles for each family.
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, each family can purchase 2 or 3 vehicles only so, because of
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number
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of cars will decrease and pollution as well.
Secondly
, public transportation should be free in the city area. If there are no charges on public transport ,so it can be a reason to influence people to travel in buses and trains which can be a major factor to decrease
traffic
issues. In conclusion, the
traffic
issue is a controversial issue for all among the world and it should
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as much as possible but mentioned measurements can be useful to reduce
this
issue.
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