Car ownership has increased so rapidly over the past thirty years that many cities in the world are now 'one big traffic jam'. How true do you think this statement is? What measures can governments take to discourage people from using their cars?
The
Number
of cars Correct your spelling
number
are
increasing in several cities of the world in Change the verb form
is
compare
to the Replace the word
comparison
last
three decades which is a major cause of traffic
jam issues. However
, i
believe thatChange the capitalization
I
,
it can be Remove the comma
apply
a
awful condition for all Change the article
an
the
humans. Steps which should Correct article usage
apply
be take
by Change the verb form
be taken
government
to reduce Add an article
the government
this problems
is mentioned in Change the determiner
this problem
these problems
following
paragraphs.
Nowadays, Correct article usage
the following
population
is rapidly increasing in several countries. Add an article
the population
Therefore
, the number of vehicles are
Change the verb form
is
also
rising. In many homes, every people have a separate vehicle. In addition
, due to save
their time citizen afford to travel with their own vehicle Change the verb form
saving
instead
of public transports. Because of that reason, in rush hours like morning and evening
people are suffering Add a comma
,evening
with
long distances Change the preposition
from
traffic
jams.
In
the contrary, to solve Change the preposition
On
this
problem the government should take steps in positive
way. There are several ways for government to reduce Change the article
a positive
this
problem. Firstly
, they should decide on a limit for vehicles for each family. For example
, each family can purchase 2 or 3 vehicles only so, because of it
Change the pronoun
its
number
of cars will decrease and pollution as well. Change the article
the number
Secondly
, public transportation should be free in the city area. If there are no charges on public transport ,so it can be a reason to influence people to travel in buses and trains which can be a major factor to decrease traffic
issues.
In conclusion, the traffic
issue is a controversial issue for all among the world and it should be solve
as much as possible but mentioned measurements can be useful to reduce Change the verb form
be solved
this
issue.Submitted by shubhampatel19021 on
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