Nowadays, people have greater access to fast food. do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages

In
this
generation, fast
food
is more accessible to humans. It is readily available everywhere, at
anytime
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of the day.
This
is considered
as
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an unhealthy
food
to
consumed
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but due to the
convenience
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it
is being patronize
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by people.
Readily
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available meal is for busy people.
In particular
, fast
food
is
a junk
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junk food
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food
,
this
is contain
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of
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preservatives, saturated fats and tons of sugars that may affect our health in the long run. Occasional consumption maybe of
these kind
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of
foods
is quite acceptable.
For example
, eating pizza during a holiday with friends is considerable.
Moreover
, we should educate ourselves what is the bad effect of consuming precooked
foods
. But, there is
also
advantage
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on having access to fast
food
,
for instance
, the workers are too tired to prepare for their meal, so, they will just decide to order
for
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a readily available meal to ease their hunger. Because of
this
, there is
good
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a good
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and bad effect in accessing precooked
foods
, but, we have just to keep in mind that too much is not good. To sum up, to people who can easily access
to
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fast
food
, there are good advantages and disadvantages to
human
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body. Always look into the
healthy
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benefits rather than convenience. Still, junk
foods
are preserved
foods
.
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