Nowadays, people have greater access to fast food. do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages
In
this
generation, fast food
is more accessible to humans. It is readily available everywhere, at anytime
of the day. Replace the word
any time
This
is considered as
an unhealthy Change preposition
apply
food
to consumed
but due to the Change the form of the verb
consume
convenience
it Add a comma
,convenience
is being patronize
by people. Change the verb form
is being patronized
Readily
available meal is for busy people.
Add an article
The readily
A readily
In particular
, fast food
is a junk
Remove the article
junk food
a portion of junk food
food
, this
is contain
Change the verb form
contains
of
preservatives, saturated fats and tons of sugars that may affect our health in the long run. Occasional consumption maybe of Remove the preposition
apply
these kind
of Change the determiner
this kind
these kinds
foods
is quite acceptable. For example
, eating pizza during a holiday with friends is considerable. Moreover
, we should educate ourselves what is the bad effect of consuming precooked foods
.
But, there is also
advantage
on having access to fast Correct article usage
an advantage
food
, for instance
, the workers are too tired to prepare for their meal, so, they will just decide to order for
a readily available meal to ease their hunger. Because of Change preposition
apply
this
, there is good
and bad effect in accessing precooked Add an article
a good
the good
foods
, but, we have just to keep in mind that too much is not good.
To sum up, to people who can easily access to
fast Change preposition
apply
food
, there are good advantages and disadvantages to human
body. Always look into the Add an article
the human
healthy
benefits rather than convenience. Still, junk Replace the word
health
foods
are preserved foods
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