Nowadays, people have greater access to fast food. do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages

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generation, fast

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is more accessible to humans. It is readily available everywhere, at

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of the day.

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is considered

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an unhealthy

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but due to the

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it

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by people.

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available meal is for busy people.

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, fast

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a junk

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junk food

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food

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is contain

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of

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preservatives, saturated fats and tons of sugars that may affect our health in the long run. Occasional consumption maybe of

these kind

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of

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is quite acceptable.

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, eating pizza during a holiday with friends is considerable.

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, we should educate ourselves what is the bad effect of consuming precooked

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. But, there is

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advantage

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on having access to fast

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,

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, the workers are too tired to prepare for their meal, so, they will just decide to order

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a readily available meal to ease their hunger. Because of

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and bad effect in accessing precooked

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, but, we have just to keep in mind that too much is not good. To sum up, to people who can easily access

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fast

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, there are good advantages and disadvantages to

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body. Always look into the

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benefits rather than convenience. Still, junk

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are preserved

foods

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