Although you have never formally studied computing, you have always been interested in computers. You have just read about a computer course that really interests you, but it is only for people who have completed an elementary course. Write a letter to the college enrolment officer. In your letter explain why you are writing describe your circumstances ask if a special exception can be made for you so you can enrol in the course You do NOT need to write any addresses.

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Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing

this

letter to request you for a special consideration towards enrolling me into the Advanced Computing

course

that is

scheduled for

month at your college. I am professionally working as a Software Developer for a consultant firm in New Delhi and have a bachelor’s degree in Electronics Engineering from one of the top tier colleges in North India. I have read the eligibility criteria for admission into the aforementioned

course

on your website, and I am eager to join it. While the relevance of my qualification does not meet those requirements, but I want to mention that I have covered and used a wide range of elementary concepts of computing

such

as linear arithmetic and non-linear progressions during my two years of job as a software developer since it involves an immense amount of complex calculations for building various computer applications. In view of my practical usage of the basic concepts of mathematical computation, which I strongly believe will be sufficient for the

course

, along with my passion for

this

field, I request you to review my application with special consideration to let me participate in

this

academic

course

. I will be looking forward to your reply. Yours faithfully, Rachit Joshi

Submitted by karampalvirk21 on Sat Jun 05 2021

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