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Many People believe that the increased presence of violence in film and Television these days is responsible for the rising incidents of violent crime among youths in society. They argue that government have a duty to control the media so as to reduce this phenomenon. Do you agree with this argument?

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Nowadays, big screens and small screens are much accessible to the public as cable subscriptions and the amount of going to the movie theatres can be very reasonable. Due to globalization, a person living in Asia can view films created by Americans or Australians. Generally, some small-screen series can feature cruel titles and scenes which can be accessed by anybody, including the youngsters on television and the internet. Without adult supervision, watching
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 kind of themes can be very influential to some youths. It can lead to them getting the wrong message, that it is ok to apply what they have seen to their daily lives. For
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murder, robbery, kidnapping, rape and drug abuse.
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, while others agree that one country's administration should regulate the cinema industry and its content, others oppose
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 idea. In my opinion, I contest that one's government should manipulate the film and television industry. It is the responsibility of the producers and creators to filter their content and identify their audience.
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, the youth's actions should not only depend on the influence of social media, but it should go back to their upbringing, values, and principles they live by. In conclusion, what we observe on the big and small screens should just raise awareness and serve as entertainment. The youngsters should be guided by the adults on the kind of films they view and explain the reasons behind the rage and misdemeanours that the actors portray in the movies.
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