Some students lives with their parent and some live away from their parent. What are the Advantages and disadvantage of both.

Recently, it is an obvious fact that undergraduate's abodes close to their loved ones while others decide to be far from their parents.It can be seen that both
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merits and demerits.living with loved ones increased the bonds among family
members
and
also
promote support .
However
,no privacy is attacked to
this
.
In contrast
,away from home encouraged independence and a sense of responsibility while boredom and loneliness are the most common problems seen in
this
category of people.
Firstly
, residing with
one
's family
members
increase the bonds.It encourages the rapport between an individual and other member's of the family to be effective and promote cordial relationship among family
members
.
This
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a
person
to relate freely and
also
ventilates
one
's mind and
also
it improves the support from
members
of the family which include financial and moral that might be absent when living alone.
For instance
,a Tanzanian student who came to Nigeria for her master's program in Nigeria was able to
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her stay with the fund's she normally gets weekly from her aunt
who
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she's living
with
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.
Conversely
one
of the
advantage
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advantages
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of staying away is the sense of responsibility and independence it promotes. A
person
who stayed alone will
to
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avoid lavish spending because the
person
will be aware of all the
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such
as electricity bill,security bill and all that he will have to pay for.Since the
person
is aware that his staying alone he will be accountable and committed
in
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spending.
On the other hand
,
one
of the cons of living with family is the fact that no privacy is seen because family
members
will want to invade
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every
affairs
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of an individual.
For example
,
female
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a female
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undergraduate who is staying with her relations will not be free to
invites
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her male partner for
visit
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especially when any member of the family is around.
In contrast
, away from home results
into
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loneliness and boredom.it increases the risk of mental illness
such
as depression.
This
makes a
person
to
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think irrelevantly and
also
prevent
one
from sharing his/her burden or challenges.
For instance
, based on
African
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statistics journal, living alone accounted for 80% of depression in young adults. In conclusion, I would
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that living with family and living alone have both advantages and disadvantages.
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