Recently, it is an obvious fact that undergraduate's abodes close to their loved
ones
while others decide to be far from their parents.It can be seen that both have merits and demerits.living with loved Use synonyms
ones
increased the bonds among family Use synonyms
members
and Use synonyms
also
promote support .Linking Words
However
,no privacy is attached to Linking Words
this
.Linking Words
In contrast
,away from home encouraged independence and a sense of responsibility while boredom and loneliness are the most common problems seen in Linking Words
this
category of people.
Linking Words
Firstly
, residing with Linking Words
Use synonyms
ones
family Correct pronoun usage
one
members
increase the bonds.It encourages the rapport between an individual and other member's of the family to be effective and promote cordial relationship among family Use synonyms
members
.Use synonyms
This
Linking Words
allow
a Change the verb form
allows
person
to relate freely and Use synonyms
also
ventilates Linking Words
Use synonyms
ones
mind and Correct pronoun usage
one
also
it improves the support from Linking Words
members
of the family which include financial and moral that might be absent when living alone.Use synonyms
For instance
,a Tanzanian student who came to Nigeria for her master's program in Nigeria was able to Linking Words
enjoyed
her stay with the fund's she normally gets weekly from her aunt Change the verb
enjoy
who
she's livingChange the pronoun
whom
with
. Change preposition
apply
Conversely
one of the Linking Words
advantage
of staying away is the sense of responsibility and independence it promotes. A Change to a plural noun
advantages
person
who stayed alone will avoid lavish spending because the Use synonyms
person
will be aware of all the Use synonyms
bill's
Change the noun form
bills
bill
such
as electricity bill,security bill and all that he will have to pay for.Since the Linking Words
person
is aware that his staying alone he will be accountable and committed Use synonyms
in
spending.
Change preposition
to
On the other hand
, one of the cons of living with family is the fact that no privacy is seen because family Linking Words
members
will want to invade Use synonyms
in
every Change preposition
apply
affairs
of an individual. Change to a singular noun
affair
For example
, Linking Words
female
undergraduate who is staying with her relations will not be free to Add an article
a female
invites
her male partner for a visit especially when any member of the family is around. Change the verb
invite
In contrast
, away from home results Linking Words
into
loneliness and boredom.it increases the risk of mental illness Change preposition
in
such
as depression. Linking Words
This
makes a Linking Words
person
Use synonyms
to
think irrelevantly and Change the verb form
apply
also
prevent one from sharing his/her burden or challenges. Linking Words
For instance
, base on Linking Words
African
statistics journal, living alone accounted for 80% of depression in young adults.
In conclusion, I would Correct article usage
the African
maintained
that living with family and living alone have both advantages and disadvantages.Change the verb form
maintain
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