Some people lived close to their parent while some lives a far from their parent what are the advantages and disadvantage of both

Recently, it is an obvious fact that undergraduate's abodes close to their loved
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while others decide to be far from their parents.It can be seen that both have merits and demerits.living with loved
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increased the bonds among family
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and
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promote support .
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,no privacy is attached to
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.
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,away from home encouraged independence and a sense of responsibility while boredom and loneliness are the most common problems seen in
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category of people.
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, residing with
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ones
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family
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increase the bonds.It encourages the rapport between an individual and other member's of the family to be effective and promote cordial relationship among family
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.
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allow
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a
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to relate freely and
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ventilates
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ones
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mind and
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it improves the support from
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of the family which include financial and moral that might be absent when living alone.
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,a Tanzanian student who came to Nigeria for her master's program in Nigeria was able to
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her stay with the fund's she normally gets weekly from her aunt
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she's living
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.
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one of the
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of staying away is the sense of responsibility and independence it promotes. A
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who stayed alone will avoid lavish spending because the
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will be aware of all the
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as electricity bill,security bill and all that he will have to pay for.Since the
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is aware that his staying alone he will be accountable and committed
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spending.
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, one of the cons of living with family is the fact that no privacy is seen because family
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will want to invade
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every
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of an individual.
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,
female
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undergraduate who is staying with her relations will not be free to
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her male partner for a visit especially when any member of the family is around.
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, away from home results
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loneliness and boredom.it increases the risk of mental illness
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as depression.
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makes a
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to
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think irrelevantly and
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prevent one from sharing his/her burden or challenges.
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, base on
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statistics journal, living alone accounted for 80% of depression in young adults. In conclusion, I would
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that living with family and living alone have both advantages and disadvantages.

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