Some people lived close to their parent while some lives a far from their parent what are the advantages and disadvantage of both
Recently, it is an obvious fact that undergraduate's abodes close to their loved
ones
while others decide to be far from their parents.It can be seen that both have merits and demerits.living with loved ones
increased the bonds among family members
and also
promote support .However
,no privacy is attached to this
.In contrast
,away from home encouraged independence and a sense of responsibility while boredom and loneliness are the most common problems seen in this
category of people.
Firstly
, residing with ones
family Correct pronoun usage
one
members
increase the bonds.It encourages the rapport between an individual and other member's of the family to be effective and promote cordial relationship among family members
.This
allow
a Change the verb form
allows
person
to relate freely and also
ventilates ones
mind and Correct pronoun usage
one
also
it improves the support from members
of the family which include financial and moral that might be absent when living alone.For instance
,a Tanzanian student who came to Nigeria for her master's program in Nigeria was able to enjoyed
her stay with the fund's she normally gets weekly from her aunt Change the verb
enjoy
who
she's livingChange the pronoun
whom
with
. Change preposition
apply
Conversely
one of the advantage
of staying away is the sense of responsibility and independence it promotes. A Change to a plural noun
advantages
person
who stayed alone will avoid lavish spending because the person
will be aware of all the bill's
Change the noun form
bills
bill
such
as electricity bill,security bill and all that he will have to pay for.Since the person
is aware that his staying alone he will be accountable and committed in
spending.
Change preposition
to
On the other hand
, one of the cons of living with family is the fact that no privacy is seen because family members
will want to invade in
every Change preposition
apply
affairs
of an individual. Change to a singular noun
affair
For example
, female
undergraduate who is staying with her relations will not be free to Add an article
a female
invites
her male partner for a visit especially when any member of the family is around. Change the verb
invite
In contrast
, away from home results into
loneliness and boredom.it increases the risk of mental illness Change preposition
in
such
as depression. This
makes a person
to
think irrelevantly and Change the verb form
apply
also
prevent one from sharing his/her burden or challenges. For instance
, base on African
statistics journal, living alone accounted for 80% of depression in young adults.
In conclusion, I would Correct article usage
the African
maintained
that living with family and living alone have both advantages and disadvantages.Change the verb form
maintain
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