Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

It has been a long-standing discussion about whether the results of information in any field
such
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economic
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and
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should be shared freely in public or it should be confidential to gain profits. In
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essay, I will explain these two for and against ideas, whereas in my point of view approach to the facts
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precious
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. On the one hand, some
people
think that contributing the
research
of details in any fields should be free.
In other words
,
people
can easily access to read and study in their interest fields using the internet to achieve success in their life by getting the references the outcome of researches.
For example
, as for postgraduate students who might not learn well and finish their thesis project without reference to others
research
papers
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done by some researchers.
Therefore
,
research
information is very beneficial for
people
and sharing it is good for them to be easy to get knowledge.
On the other hand
, others believe that knowledge is vital, or it is costly, and it should be private than sharing in public freely.
For instance
, some scientific
research
for searching new medicine to cure for cancer that
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long
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time to be able to use in public and funs and it wasn’t allowed to access in
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or social media for
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. So,
this
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facts and costs are relative to the economic activities and as for investors, they tend to get a profit
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their effort. To sum up,
although
sharing information is helpful for
people
to be easy to get knowledge, I assert that it should be private and valuable as some
people
have paid their time and efforts on those facts.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • information sharing
  • scientific research
  • business
  • academic world
  • advancement of knowledge
  • progress
  • collaboration
  • cross-disciplinary research
  • open access
  • democratization of information
  • transparency
  • credibility
  • intellectual property
  • security concerns
  • commercial interests
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