People are surrounded by advertising, which has an increasing effect on our lives. Do you think the positive effects of this outweigh the negative effects?
It appears that you are missing a comma after the introductory phrase Through advertisement. Consider adding a comma.
The word informative doesn’t seem to fit this context. Consider replacing it with a different one.
The noun phrase advertisement seems to be missing a determiner before it. Consider adding an article.
It appears that the form of the verb fare does not work with are in this sentence.
The word fare doesn’t seem to fit this context. Consider replacing it with a different one.
It seems that article use may be incorrect here.
It seems that article use may be incorrect here.
It appears that the phrase huge number does not contain the correct article usage. Consider making a change.
It seems that article use may be incorrect here.
The singular verb advertises does not appear to agree with the plural subject entrepreneurs. Consider changing the verb form for subject-verb agreement.
It appears that family friendly is missing a hyphen. Consider adding the hyphen(s).
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Linking words for giving examples:
- for example
- for instance
- to illustrate this
- to give a clear example
- such as
- namely
- to illustrate
- take, for example