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SOME PEOPLE CLAIM THAT MEDIA HAS A NEGATIVE INFLUENCE ON CONTEMPORARY SOCIETY. THEY THINK THAT THERE IS VERY LITTLE TOLERANCE FOR NEW IDEAS BECAUSE OF ITS IMPACT. TO WHAT EXTENT DO YOU AGREE OR DISAGREE WITH THIS OPINION ?

There is a common belief that the
media
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 has affected
society
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 in a negative way and make our once diverse too uniform.
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, I support the idea that culture is becoming more variable than ever before due to some positive influences of social networking sites.
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, it has
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 people’s general outlook on life and made our world more magnificent.
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 with, mass
media
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 promotes potential thinkings which are extremely distinct. In the past, we didn’t have a chance to explore deeply
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other cultures, traditions and religions whereas the advent of various types of
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 nowadays
enable
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 us to set foot on
knowledges
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knowledge
pieces of knowledge
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 belonging to almost every fields.
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, people watch a number of movies and documentaries that depict ways of life in different countries.
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 of leading to a simplification of cultures,
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 creates a more accepting towards the prejudices and values of people from other backgrounds.
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, it stimulates people to cross the line to a more open-minded
society
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. On top of that,
media
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 content makes diverse cultures more significant by helping to maintain and develop trends in
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. It acts as versatile devices that allow art and unicity to come together to be more innovative and timely. By way of example, take Vietnamese fashion. After approaching lots of European
culture
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 appeared on internet platforms, young generation tends to merge their fashions with those popular in Europe.
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, a new type of clothing style combined elements from both regions
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 born
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 as students wearing aodai to school like putting on sporty shoes
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 of traditional ones. To sum up, the
media
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 has been playing a
viral
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 role in our
society
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 and obviously transforming it into a fascinating place. For these reasons, the
media
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’s merits seem to
outweight
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outweigh
 the drawbacks.

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