SOME PEOPLE CLAIM THAT MEDIA HAS A NEGATIVE INFLUENCE ON CONTEMPORARY SOCIETY. THEY THINK THAT THERE IS VERY LITTLE TOLERANCE FOR NEW IDEAS BECAUSE OF ITS IMPACT. TO WHAT EXTENT DO YOU AGREE OR DISAGREE WITH THIS OPINION ?

There is a common belief that the

media

has affected

society

in a negative way and make our once diverse too uniform.

However

, I support the idea that culture is becoming more variable than ever before due to some positive influences of social networking sites.

Moreover

, it has

broaden

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people’s general outlook on life and made our world more magnificent.

To begin

with, mass

media

promotes potential thinkings which are extremely distinct. In the past, we didn’t have a chance to explore deeply

about

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other cultures, traditions and religions whereas the advent of various types of

media

nowadays

enable

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us to set foot on

knowledges

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knowledge

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belonging to almost every fields.

For instance

, people watch a number of movies and documentaries that depict ways of life in different countries.

Instead

of leading to a simplification of cultures,

this

creates a more accepting towards the prejudices and values of people from other backgrounds.

Furthermore

, it stimulates people to cross the line to a more open-minded

society

. On top of that,

media

content makes diverse cultures more significant by helping to maintain and develop trends in

society

. It acts as versatile devices that allow art and unicity to come together to be more innovative and timely. By way of example, take Vietnamese fashion. After approaching lots of European

culture

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appeared on internet platforms, young generation tends to merge their fashions with those popular in Europe.

As a result

, a new type of clothing style combined elements from both regions

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born

such

as students wearing aodai to school like putting on sporty shoes

instead

of traditional ones. To sum up, the

media

has been playing a

viral

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role in our

society

and obviously transforming it into a fascinating place. For these reasons, the

media

’s merits seem to

outweight

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outweigh

the drawbacks.