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Because of the busy pace of modern life ,many children spend most of their time indoors and have little exposure to the natural world. How important is it for children to learn to understand and appreciate nature? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience

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. Recently, we live in an age where many youngsters are denied the opportunity of knowing about their
environment
 due to d effect of civilization ( modern life and new technology)/
Although
 when
children
 are
stucked
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stuck
tucked
 inside their home it has a positive effect on them.
However
,
Children
 who are given the privilege to be exposed to their natural world are able to understand
culture
 and tradition.
Also
,it helps them to have increased knowledge and develop
interest
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an interest
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 in the profession they desire to study.
Firstly
,
culture
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a culture
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 which is defined as the art,custom ,habit of a particular society is being known by the
children
 when they are chanced to relate with the
environment
. Youngsters who relate with the
environment
 will understand
certain
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the certain
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culture
 ( especially about greeting of elders, communicating with people among many others)
For instance
, only
children
 who relate with the elders in the society are aware of the appropriate ways of greeting the older ones.
Also
,young folks that having enough access to the natural
environment
 tends to be versatile than their age mates which are not given
this
 chance.Research has
showed
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 it that when
children
 are exposed to the
environment
, it builds their interest
on
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in
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 what profession to choosing in future.
For instance
, a known scholar in
geology
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the geology
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 department
in
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university
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 of life said he was motivated to study geology since his primary school days
as a result
 of the excursion he visited in idanre hill.
On the other hand
,a paediatrician once opined that "
children
 who spend most of their days inside the house are more focus
in
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 their academics when compared to their mates who do not belong to
this
 category".
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Further more
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,spending most
times
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 at home allows the
children
 to have enough time to themselves. In conclusion, it is imperative to know that allowing
children
 to be exposed to the natural world has a positive influence on them which include understanding
about
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culture
 and tradition.
Also
,it helps them to
decides
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 on what career to choose in life.
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