Friendships can be very meaningful and special but also, very complicated. What are the qualities of a great friend? What are some things that can weaken a close relationship over time?

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Friends support us

through

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our life. They are the

people

we share interests in common. We share our privacy and tell our untold secrets

with

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these

people

. And when we enjoy each others company, the relationships get stronger. Each person rather choosing his type of friend and when the right choice is done ,your friend

become

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near and dear to you.

However

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there can be

conflicts

sometime

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which weaken the relationships. I will mention

these kind

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conflicts

and address each point I brush.

Reationship

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Relationship

between

two

people

are

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built on mutual trust. So as to provide

this

people

spend

time

togather

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together

and try to get to know each other. Of

course

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there is before, the

first

time

two

people

see

eachother

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each other

, they look at the physical features of the other side which catch their attention most and

then

when they catch the chance of meeting, they talk and the process begins. The more they meet and chat the less superficial friendships occur. Each

time

we live something with somebody gives

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chance to make memories and those memories are the primary reasons to become close friends with someone.The

time

we confide in someone, we find faith, naturalness, warmness, love and mutual

repect

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respect

. As for me, these are the former and the key features that a

friendship

should have. In a

friendship

, some

conflicts

and arguments may occur occasionally. I divide these arguments and gaps into

two

categories. I call one of them “

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the little division of ides” which is completely normal to happen as long as it happens once in a blue moon.

These kind

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of arguments happens since

two

sides don’t agree with the same statement and have

conflicts

. It generally

don’t

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damage the friendships and sides begin to get on well again after a while. The other conflict

occurs

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in a

friendship

is called “devastating cause”

”

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. Getting over

with

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these fights are tougher in general. Gaps between

two

people

are caused due to big lies, cheating, talking behind and other ugly

behaviors

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. When

people

experience these with the person they spend a whale of

time

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a time

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, they

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with, they

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feel a huge disappointment. Even though

the

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apologizes, the

friendship

cannot be as how it was before. The former conflict reason I mentioned is harmless I can say whereas the

second

issue

people

have damages and ends the relationships. In conclusion, building a strong

friendship

is not a piece of cake, it

neccessitates

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necessitates

some pivotal rules and

behaviors

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. So as to assess and

persue

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pursue

peruse

content

friendship

, the mistakes which weaken relationship

should’t

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shouldn't

should

have done. Not only does it damage the relationship, but

also

reduces the trust of someone. We are

imortal

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immortal

mortal

living creatures and we have limited

time

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earth

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. The more we spend

time

having happy and

long standing

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friendships , the more qualified and joyful life we have. We have to keep our friends by our side and we should achieve holding through thick and thin together

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Friendships can be very meaningful and special but also, very complicated. What are the qualities of a great friend? What are some things that can weaken a close relationship over time?

Fully explain your ideas

Nowadays technology is increasingly being used to monitor what people are saying and doing (for example, through cellphone tracking and security cameras). In many cases, the people being monitored are unaware that this is happening.

Some people think an international car free day is an effective way to reduce air pollution.Others think there are more effective ways do to this. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

The most important aim of science should be to improve people's lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Some think the current generation should take steps to protect the environment for the next generation.to what extend do you agree or dis agree.

You recently broke your leg and your colleagues from work sent you get well cards and presents. Write a letter to them and say •Thanks them for supporting you. •Describe how you spend your time. •Explain about your recovery process.