Friendships can be very meaningful and special but also, very complicated. What are the qualities of a great friend? What are some things that can weaken a close relationship over time?

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Friends support us

through

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our life. They are the

people

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we share interests in common. We share our privacy and tell our untold secrets

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these

people

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. And when we enjoy each others company, the relationships get stronger. Each person rather choosing his type of friend and when the right choice is done ,your friend

become

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near and dear to you.

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there can be

conflicts

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sometime

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which weaken the relationships. I will mention

these kind

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conflicts

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and address each point I brush.

Reationship

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Relationship

between

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people

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built on mutual trust. So as to provide

this

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people

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spend

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togather

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together

and try to get to know each other. Of

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there is before, the

first

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time

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two

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people

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see

eachother

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each other

, they look at the physical features of the other side which catch their attention most and

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when they catch the chance of meeting, they talk and the process begins. The more they meet and chat the less superficial friendships occur. Each

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we live something with somebody gives

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chance to make memories and those memories are the primary reasons to become close friends with someone.The

time

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we confide in someone, we find faith, naturalness, warmness, love and mutual

repect

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respect

. As for me, these are the former and the key features that a

friendship

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should have. In a

friendship

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, some

conflicts

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and arguments may occur occasionally. I divide these arguments and gaps into

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categories. I call one of them “

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the little division of ides” which is completely normal to happen as long as it happens once in a blue moon.

These kind

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of arguments happens since

two

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sides don’t agree with the same statement and have

conflicts

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. It generally

don’t

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damage the friendships and sides begin to get on well again after a while. The other conflict

occurs

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in a

friendship

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is called “devastating cause”

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. Getting over

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these fights are tougher in general. Gaps between

two

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people

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are caused due to big lies, cheating, talking behind and other ugly

behaviors

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. When

people

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experience these with the person they spend a whale of

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time

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, they

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feel a huge disappointment. Even though

the

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apologizes, the

friendship

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cannot be as how it was before. The former conflict reason I mentioned is harmless I can say whereas the

second

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issue

people

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have damages and ends the relationships. In conclusion, building a strong

friendship

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is not a piece of cake, it

neccessitates

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necessitates

some pivotal rules and

behaviors

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. So as to assess and

persue

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pursue

peruse

content

friendship

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, the mistakes which weaken relationship

should’t

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shouldn't

should

have done. Not only does it damage the relationship, but

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reduces the trust of someone. We are

imortal

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immortal

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living creatures and we have limited

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earth

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. The more we spend

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having happy and

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friendships , the more qualified and joyful life we have. We have to keep our friends by our side and we should achieve holding through thick and thin together

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Sentence 2 - Example
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.5

Complete response

4.5

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

5 paragraphs

489 words

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Friendships can be very meaningful and special but also, very complicated. What are the qualities of a great friend? What are some things that can weaken a close relationship over time?

Fully explain your ideas

Many people think that painting and music do not directly improve the quality of people. Therefore, governments should not spend too much money on artistic projects. Do you agree or disagree?

Planting trees is very important for the environment. Som people says trees should be planted in the vacant areas of cities and towns, while other says housing facilities should be build instead.

Men and women are different in terms of their characteristics and abilities. For this reason, some jobs are better done by men and others by women. Do you agree or disagree?

Some people say that the only reason for learning language is in order to travel ro or work in a foreign country. Others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language. Discuss both views and give your opinion.