some people think that sports involving violence and martial arts to be banned from tv and competitions, to what extend do you agree?

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are so vital for every individual as some individuals think that some

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like martial arts should be banned from social sites and competitions. In my opinion, I totally disagree with

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as every person have their own skills in certain things.

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are necessary for everyone as

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help to maintain physical health and some

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as martial arts, boxing and many other teaches to protect yourself in any circumstance.

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, In 2005 survey conducted in Canada shows that women who learn

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of

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can protect themself from major crimes.

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, showing these

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in

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way on Television and on other social sites will help youngsters to learn some new things and these

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help individuals in their personal life as these things will teach discipline and confidence in life. On other hand, opponents argue that these

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should

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from Television and

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from competitions as these

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promote violence and

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can be dangerous for anyone.

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, some shows promote

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of

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and

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watching television can be easily harmed by performing these

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which is very dangerous for them.

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, some schools do have

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of

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which promote violence and crime in students after learning boxing and martial arts it would be harmful

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other students. To sum up,

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would say performing and learning these

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in the proper way will be beneficial for every individual, whereas we

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deny the fact that some harms can

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if performing inaccurate way.