some people think that sports involving violence and martial arts to be banned from tv and competitions, to what extend do you agree?

Sports

are so vital for every individual as some individuals think that some

sports

like martial arts should be banned from social sites and competitions. In my opinion, I totally disagree with

this

as every person have their own skills in certain things.

To begin

with,

sports

are necessary for everyone as

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help to maintain physical health and some

sports

such

as martial arts, boxing and many other teaches to protect yourself in any circumstance.

For instance

, In 2005 survey conducted in Canada shows that women who learn

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of

activities

can protect themself from major crimes.

Moreover

, showing these

activities

in

proper

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way on Television and on other social sites will help youngsters to learn some new things and these

activities

also

help individuals in their personal life as these things will teach discipline and confidence in life. On other hand, opponents argue that these

activities

should

banned

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from Television and

also

from competitions as these

activities

promote violence and

also

can be dangerous for anyone.

For example

, some shows promote

these kind

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of

activities

and

childrens

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children

children's

watching television can be easily harmed by performing these

activities

which is very dangerous for them.

Furthermore

, some schools do have

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of

activities

which promote violence and crime in students after learning boxing and martial arts it would be harmful

for

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other students. To sum up,

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would say performing and learning these

activities

in the proper way will be beneficial for every individual, whereas we

cant

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deny the fact that some harms can

be contain

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if performing inaccurate way.