Every year several languages die out. Certain people think that it is important because life will be easier if there are few dialect. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

In the contemporary era, there is an argument over an issue that each year a plethora of language dies out .
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individual considered that it plays a pivotal role in everyone life if there are
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accents . In my opinion, I completely
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agree with the statement due to the following reasons that can be explained in the upcoming paragraph.
To begin
with, there is no language barrier and communication will become easier among peoples of distinct nations.
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earth , it will play a tremendous role in the whole world. Masses can speak to anyone without any fear because there is
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tongue and human beings can convey their messages without facing challenges.
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, the headline in 'Moscow Time' revealed that the Nigerian citizens merely speak in English and when they go to
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Europe they do not find any difficulties to talk with them .
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, lesser speeches help to ameliorate these kinds of complications.
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, with the aid of common tongue trade between countries will
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. Since the trend of English accent has rocketed, folks show an inclination towards it to learn
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. International traders invest in myriad nations ,as of widespread speech. Import and export will never increase unless in the universe there is only one dialect.
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language
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Hindi .
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altruistic method to
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the economy of any country. In conclusion, there must be lesser speeches in the universe because
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can easily understand a dialect as well as overseas business increase .
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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