The most effective way to solve traffic and transport problems in the cities is to encourage people from suburbs or the countryside to live in the cities. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

It is true that traffic is one of the most complicated
issues
in the country.
Therefore
, a fair amount of people believes that
this
could be the same problem across the globe, and I totally agree with
this
statement and would like to present my thought process on how to enable the people from
cities
to the countryside to live. To embark on, villages are the backbone to any country, wherein we could see a pleasant environment without any rush. There are multiple advantages if we plan to live in the countryside and it gives superb opportunities to all of us.
firstly
, it will avoid the traffic challenges,
hence
travel
time
will be reduced.
Secondly
, taking advantage of greenery without any pollution-related
issues
and
last
but not the least friendly neighbourhoods and good relations among the villagers.
However
, undoubtedly, we do have so many challenges in metro and urban
cities
. As per google recent survey findings, most of the health-related
issues
are diagnosed those who are travelling in
cities
for a long
time
.
On the other hand
, the recent high death rates are due to traffic-related accidents only and the traffic is killing valuable
time
of an employee and,
moreover
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the traffic-related
issues
such
as travel
time
, parking space and pollution-related
issues
cannot be resolved and replaced forever in the metro and urban
cities
. To sum up, at present the good quality of life and friendly neighbourhoods communities can be found only in villages but not
cities
as there is always huge population and pollution-related
issues
.
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