A person’s worth nowadays seems to be judged according to social status and material possessions. Old-fashioned values, such as honour, kindness and trust, no longer seem important. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
With the popularity of social media and the flaunt wealth effect of various celebrities,a person’s worth nowadays seems to have judged according to social
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phenomenon often makes Linking Words
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feel old-fashioned values, Use synonyms
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as honour, kindness and trust, no longer seem important. I partly agree with Linking Words
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view.In Linking Words
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essay, I will explain my thoughts and reasons.
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thing we could accept is that most Linking Words
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jobs, and obtain social Use synonyms
status
and better material life that they deserve.So judges a person's Use synonyms
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by his social Use synonyms
status
and material possessions is reasonable. Use synonyms
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as Bill Gates' Microsoft computer operating system, Elon Musk's new energy Tesla cars and Jack Ma's Alibaba mobile payment system, have changed Linking Words
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society
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, there are more criteria and references to evaluate a person's Linking Words
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, if we check the actual social life surrounding us, there are still many Use synonyms
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doing ordinary jobs. On their duty conscientiously and silently contributing their Use synonyms
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. In school, teachers patiently teach students knowledge and cultivate the future power for Use synonyms
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. Scientists focus on numerous researches to provide new technologies for the development of Use synonyms
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. Doctors and nurses help and save Use synonyms
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don't know all their names, they don't go around flaunting their social Use synonyms
status
and material possessions, but most of them have old-fashioned values, Use synonyms
such
as honour, kindness and trust to perform their work with the best.
In conclusion, I consider the development of the Linking Words
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cannot be separated from the efforts of everyone, no matter successful or not, we should adhere to these good qualities, do our own work seriously, and contribute our Use synonyms
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to the Use synonyms
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. Regardless of social Use synonyms
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and material wealth, each of us should strive to be an indispensable member of Use synonyms
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite