Eventually, technology will solve the most important environmental problems the world faces today. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

A theory suggests that advances in technology will allow finding solutions for the most current important environmental problems.
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essay will explain the reasons why I disagree.
First
of all, the major problem for our ecosystem is the
contamination
of land and sea. We have already identified the major problem,
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every country is aware of what is needed to do to solve it, is just a matter of a lack of disposition by governments in controlling the large corporations that are the major source of
contamination
,
for example
, artificial intelligence, of course, will identify the problems but the solutions are well known, countries need to make the companies follow the rules.
In addition
, for over fifty years we know fossil oil is a significant source of air
contamination
.
For example
, the rapid expansion of the population has elevated the number of cars in cities, we should promote the use of bicycles as a major source of transportation. In conclusion, even though artificial intelligence can definitely provide us with solutions to environmental problems, I believe we already know what needs to be done. It would take all the countries to use more strict policies regarding
contamination
.
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