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In many countries, as people are earning more these days, they are also spending money in buying more and more items. Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

#countries #people #money #items #development
In
this
 modern
era
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 everyone strives to lead a
sophesticated
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sophisticated
life
.
This
 includes living an
extravagent
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extravagant
 lifestyle and buying products that are more than essentials. A group of
people
 feel that every extra penny spent from their pockets is someone else's.
However
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 the rest contend to
this
 fact,saying if you are capable enough to earn and spend
then
 you should not feel guilty about it. I am compelled to accept that both these statements are equally true. Some
poeple
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people
 follow the quote 'Live
life
 like a king' and they work hard, leaving their families and relationships behind.
At
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 the
end
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 they spend all their earnings on expensive items like cars and modern houses.In
reality
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 there are
people
 who buy varieties of
jewelleries
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jewellery
pieces of jewellery
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, clothes even
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furniture
furnitures
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furniture
types of furniture
pieces of furniture
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 out of fascination when these are just
a
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basic need in
life
. To exemplify
this
 a recently popular news stated that
a young businessmen
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 in Japan had purchased 23 models of Audi at once because he liked cars. Though
this
 seems a show off to the outsiders, there are humans who get inspired to live
such
 a
life
. Sometimes
people
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backbite
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back bite
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 and complain
the
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 rich out of jealousy. Contrastingly, there is another group of
people
 who wisely spend the
money
 they earn. They invest their
money
 in fixed deposits,
reccuring
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recurring
 deposits even in real estates. Saving
money
 gives them
a
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hope and belief that their future has been taken care of. Some
people
 are contended by donating
money
 to the needy in the form of school supplies, food and clothes. Since they do not focus on earning more than what is required and do not spend
money
 lavishly
physchologists
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psychologists
 say that these
people
 are more likely to be attached to their families and would better in relationships. To conclude, I think
people
 have their own reasons to be who they are. Sometimes it is the inability of not having something, that makes us
to
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not value it when present in abundance.
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