In some countries, an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much fast food. It is, therefore, necessary for governments to impose a higher tax on this kind of food. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
It is very much true that, number of
health related
problems are causing due to Add a hyphen
health-related
junk
food
only. Therefore
, a fair amount of people believes that processed food
is not good for health and I strongly agree on
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with
this
statement with imposing of higher tax on the
frozen and Correct article usage
apply
junk
foods.
To emabrk
on, eating more Correct your spelling
embark
mark
junk
food
may lead to human unhealthy, eventually
we will get sick and even our body immunity system will be failed soon. Add a comma
,eventually
Firstly
, there are many of the fast
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fast-food
food
services around us, which we can have any junk
food
item with less amount of prices and quick delivery whenever we want to eat. Secondly
, we are busy with our offices
schedules and not able to prepare our home Change to a genitive case
office's
offices'
food
on daily basis, hence
most of the employees are opting for junk
food
. On the other hand
, promotional offers are highly motivating and attracting
towards Replace the word
attractive
junk
food
. For example
, Bugger King and KFC owners are tempting us like anything with their offers and discounted prices.
However
undoubtedly, there are huge damages to our human Correct your spelling
lives
lifes
due to Correct your spelling
lives
this
junk
food
. The local government has to comeup
with Correct your spelling
come up
an
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apply
additioanl
taxes and certain limitations would be necessary to keep control of these fast Correct your spelling
additional
food
items and also
it is very much required to have some sudden audits on the quality of food
and their services too. As per a
recent Google survey findings, human body immunity levels are dropping by 5% every year due to the processed Correct the article-noun agreement
apply
food
.
To sum up, health is wealth and it is very much important to have good home food
everyday
. The one who takes fast Replace the word
every day
food
daily they may not physicaly
fit and not being Correct your spelling
physically
competitent
enough when compare to home Correct your spelling
competent
food
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