Some people think history has nothing or little to tell us, but others think that studying the past history can help us better understand the present. Please discuss the two views and give your opinion

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A certain section of

people

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believes that there is no use of past days but another section of

people

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say that there is a lot to study from past which will help in making our present and future better. In my opinion, I feel that there is a need to consider past inventions and move forward by inventing new things in life.

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essay will discuss both sides of a coin. On the one hand, a small group of

people

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think that there is no use of the past inventions which in one way is correct.

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, now the whole world is facing a carona pandemic where there is no medicine previously.

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, we lost so many life's of so many

people

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all over the globe because there is nothing in history regarding

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Scientist

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strives very hard for more than a year and found a vaccine which is helping the mankind to move into the future with good health.

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, another section of

people

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believes that past

studies

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will help a lot. We cannot move forward in our lives without previous inventions.

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, previous

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on landing the moon have helped humankind to land on Mars

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with few more new additions to past

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. So we need to give importance to the previous history

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. In conclusion, if there is nothing in the past, we need to work hard and find new things for the betterment of humankind.

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, we should take into consideration of the previous

studies

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and invent more advanced techniques.

gouni.prashanthreddyMon Jun 07 2021

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