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What are the advantages and disadvantages of using robots in education?

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As the technologies develop, many people consider using
robots
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 in different spheres in order to improve the quality of life. One of the most common
activites
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activities
 that
robots
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 can do is teaching. That's why a discussion about
robots
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' usefulness is very popular. There are several advantages related to
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, mechanical teachers are an opportunity for overfilled schools to give excellent
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knowledge
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 to everyone. In many
countries
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 there are classes with 40
children
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 and only 1 teacher.
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, not every child can obtain a suitable approach and answers to concerning questions.
Robots
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 can serve as assistants and enhance the level of
education
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.
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,
robots
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 contain in their
microschemes
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micro schemes
 gigabytes of information and have
connection
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 to the internet.
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, they can help
children
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 to acquire
knowledges
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knowledge
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 at
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 faster pace.
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,
usage
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 of
robots
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 in
education
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 has
also
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 shortcomings. The
first
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 one is the high costs. The average robot costs thousands of dollars as well as its repairs.
Robots
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 are physical devices that can be damaged, especially in elementary schools.
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,
children
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 can treat
robots
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as
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 some kind of toys and do with
robots
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 whatever they want.
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,
robots
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 cannot perform
a humanlike social interactions
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. They have mechanical voices and sometimes terrible appearances, frightening
children
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. Trust is one of the factors of qualitative
education
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 that be reached between humans, but rarely between a human and a robot. To sum up, despite the drawbacks discussed above, to my mind
robots
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 are a breakthrough invention in today's
education
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. Through proper
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 many schools can gain these mechanical workers and make
learning
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the learning
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 process easier and more available.

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