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Some people think that the computers will be more intelligent than humans. Others are worried about the negative consequences of them. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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There is an opinion among scientists that the intelligence of
computers
 will surpass that of humans in the future.
However
, there is
also
 a concern about negative outcomes. I personally believe that
robots
 won't become so intelligent that we should worry about it.
Firstly
, many think that computing machines will be smarter in the future because technologies always evolve and are
the
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 part of our daily lives. It's widely known that
computers
 can perform many functions at a higher rate than
people
 but these functions are basic and established manually. What I mean is that
robots
 cannot master human skills
such
 as showing emotions and empathy, thinking critically and analyzing processes. To my mind, it's almost impossible to give
robots
 these abilities artificially, so the chances of them getting higher IQ are extremely low.
On the other hand
, other scientists show apprehension towards bad consequences. Assuming that
robots
 will become the smartest beings, we could expect these machines to develop their supremacy. They could raise the protest against humanity and take the power due to their excellent abilities.
Moreover
, they could even enslave other creatures as a sign of revenge, because
people
 exploit
computers
 and devices from their
first
 invention. As I previously mentioned,
robots
 lack empathy. To conclude, we shouldn't worry about
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 sides of
robots
, because it's unlikely for them to harm
people
. In my opinion, technologies will be more intelligent and could bring
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plenty of advantages that outweigh drawbacks. There will be no need to worry if
people
 use
computers
 wisely and
treate
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treat
treated
create
 them properly.
In addition
, I don't think that
people
 can create something with better capabilities. A man can do no more than he can.
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