Some people think that lawbreakers should be sent to prison. However, others think that better talents among those should be made to work. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Nowadays, a great deal of attention has been paid to the behaviour of prisoners. Some people insist that

criminals

should be sent to

prison

,

while

others opine there are other solutions

such

as encouraging them to work. In

this

essay, I am going to discuss both views and examine the reason why I believe lawbreakers must be in jail.

To begin

with, there are two reasons why people claim that

criminals

should be in jail.

Firstly

, the most important function of

prison

is to isolate lawbreakers from

society

. In fact, some murderers, who are recognized as "serial

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", do not reglet and reconsider what they did, and they continue criminal

acts

again and again.

Therefore

, wrongdoers need to be isolated from citizens to keep

society

safe.

In addition

to

this

, psychologically,

prison

plays a role

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proxy punishment.

For instance

, citizens learn the gravity of offences and try not to commit criminal

acts

, thanks to the existence of

prison

.

On the other hand

, others believe that

criminals

should be given a chance to expand their talents and

potentials

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for two reasons.

For example

, juvenile

criminals

often have relatively low IQ

level

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, and they engage in

violence

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acts

since they are unable to tell right from wrong. Given

this

situation, the youngsters deserve to be educated and reconsider. Another point is that there are

criminals

who have special talents that can

utilize

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for

society

.

For example

, a cracker, who invades a network illegally, can be a hacker who has deep knowledge about the Internet and

computer

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.

To conclude

, I believe both sides of the

arguments

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have merits.

However

, I opine that offenders should be sent to jail.

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this

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keeps

society

safe and

prevent

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possible criminal

acts

.