There is an increasing trend around the world of married couples deciding not to have children. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for couples who decide to do this.
Nowadays,
more
and more married couple around the world Add an article
a more
choose
not to have Change the verb form
chooses
children
. Whether or not they have children
have been widely debated and both of these views have some pros and cons, which will be discussed in this
essay.
First
and foremost, being childless means a couple to have absolute freedom to spend their own time
and money only for themselves or for him/herself. Undoubtedly, it cost fortune
to raise a child. Add an article
a fortune
For instance
, it costs parents for school
, food, sports and clothes. In general, after you became a parent, your children
will be the centre of your life and children
is always your priority so indeed it is parents’ responsibility to contribute their money for their children
to grow healthy. In addition
, parents with minors have working time
restrictions as they have to send them off to school
and collect them from school
or they have to take their children
to after school
sports program sometimes. From that perspectives, couples with no dependants will have definite freedom of finance and time
.
Conversely
, the possible disadvantage can be that people without any dependants miss out on some of the most incredible joy they would have been able to experience. Getting to witness your own child grow is an absolute pleasure as a parent. It is totally up to individuals to make up their mind if they would like to be a parent or not, however
watching your child Add a comma
,however
growth
is something you cannot replace with anything else. It can Replace the word
grow
also
result in possibility
of feeling empty and lonely as they age.
In conclusion, Add an article
the possibility
although
it is advantageous for married people not to have any children
as they probably have more
stable financial status, compared with those who have Correct article usage
a more
dependants
and Correct your spelling
dependents
also
no need to arrange your time
for children
, the outcome might be a huge difference as raising children
is a paramount and invaluable experience.Submitted by tinysprout.aus on
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Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic
IELTS advantages and disadvantages questions normally give you a statement and ask you to comment on the advantages and disadvantages of that statement.
Answer structure for the type of essay
- Introduction
- Body paragraph 1 – advantages
- Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
- Conclusion
Examples to start your body paragraph:
- The main advantage is...
- The disadvantage of this...
- The main benefit...
- Despite these advantages...
- One possible drawback...