Some people believe government should spend money on building train and subway lines to reduce traffic congestion. Others think that building more and wider roads is the better way to reduce traffic congestion. Discuss both views and give your opinion

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contradiction

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wether

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whether

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the

government

should allocate funds for setting up

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and underground routes or larger streets in order to reduce traffic congestion. In my opinion, financing metro and subway lines projects would have

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impact in minimizing the

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overcrowding traffic because they help the

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t save more money and spend it

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other projects. Some people would argue that spending public funds on establishing railways would contribute significantly in allowing large numbers of passengers to use it for travelling.

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is because it can connect the

suberbs

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suburbs

and remote areas to the city centre, which

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organizes the movement of traffic and helps people to reach their destination faster. Dubai

government

is a prime example for successfully building new metro lines in every major district area of the city, and it has resulted in facilitating

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commuting around the city,

particulary

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particularly

during the rush hours.

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Investment would lead

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enhancing the quality of the air as it has

less

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gas emissions in comparison with other

transportion

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transportation

;

such

as cars and buses.

On the other hand

, setting up new and broader roads is more important than railways because the majority of the residents have often opted to use their own vehicles whenever they need.

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is because the new highways would make it

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easier for people to commute from one location to another at any

time

they want while trains are tied with a fixed schedule forcing passengers to follow it. A typical example of

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is that most

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employees

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prefer using the highway when they go to work because it is well-known for getting faster to their destination while if they use subways, they need to move from one station to another in a

specfic

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specific

time

order putting them under the pressure of not catching metro in the right

time

.

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spending money on roads projects would help residents to be on

time

whenever they need to run some errands. To sum up,

although

it might seem sensible to consider building railways a better investment for the

government

because it could contain large crowds of travellers, others deem streets as a better way to help commuters to get on

time

and have the freedom in driving.

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However

, I would agree with the former view because building subways need

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funds, and it could carry

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of crowds compared to the highways.