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Many parents today organise extra classes for their children after school and at the weekends. Do you feel that this a worthwhile thing to do or do you feel children have enough education at school?

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In recent times, the level of competition amongst
children
 has become very high.
Moreover
,
parents
 are unable to give sufficient time to their
children
 because of their busy lifestyle. Eventually, the
children
 have to take extra
classes
.
This
 essay discusses whether
this
 is a good option or not followed by an opinion.
To begin
 with, there are so many activities that a
child
 has to learn that school education is not enough.
For instance
,
majority
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 of the institutions do not provide the option of learning additional languages
such
 as French, Spanish or German.
Therefore
,
parents
 arrange separate sessions for those.
Further
, the
parents
 are all day busy with their work.
Consequently
, for basic things like homework of their
children
 they depend on tuitions.
Additionally
, individual attention is not given at school and sometimes a student might lag behind in studies due to that. To avoid
this
 issue,
children
 go for extra
classes
.
On the contrary
, if the school authorities look after that each
child
 is taken care of, by hiring additional staff eventually every student would turn into a scholar.
Furthermore
, the schools should try to enhance the areas of
its
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 education and incorporate various kinds of extra-curricular activities in the form of personality development, dance, sports, additional language, music and much more. In that case, a
child
 would be able to experience full-fledged growth in his knowledge about different things. In my opinion, due to the complex living standard of humans these days it is mandatory for
children
 to get admitted for extra
classes
 so that they are able to cope with the
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 competition. Apparently,
this
 helps
parents
also
as
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 these
classes
 assist their
child
 in their overall advancement. To conclude, extra
classes
 have become more of a necessity currently. These
classes
 are useful for
children
 in their studies and other activities and for
parents
 as well as it acts as a substitute for their time and assistance.
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