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In some countries an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much fast food. It is therefore necessary for governments to impose a higher tax on this kind of food. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

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 are most prefer fast
food
instead
 of healthy one is a controversial issue these days.
Although
 some people think that fast
food
 is a reason why the majority of people suffering from illness
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therefore
 they
thinks
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 that impose high
taxes
 on that kind of
food
 is a great solution. I propound that I completely disagree with
this
 statement. Viewpoints on
this
 are mentioned in the following paragraphs. There are several reasons why the
government
 should not impose high
taxes
 on it. The
first
 and major one reason is there
are
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number
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a number
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 of peoples life depends on
this
 business. If
taxes
 impose on fast
food
 so, it can be a major drawback on their income source.
For instance
, due to the higher
taxes
 crowd avoid eating fast
food
 and
therefore
 it
also
 impact
on
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unemployment as well. Another point to consider is that it affects to wealth condition of the
government
.
As a result
 of a
google
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 survey, the
government
 gets majority
taxes
 from fast
food
 organisations and if that sale goes down so it directly affects
on
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government
 earning. If the income rate of the nation’s authority goes down so managing funds for other sectors like education and
medical
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 can be very difficult. That can be a serious issue for the
government
. In conclusion,
the
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fast
food
 is not good for health but it is
also
 a source of income for many people and for the
government
 as well so, to impose
this
 type of rule is not worthy. I completely against
this
 statement.
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