Studying abroad. Some claim that studying abroad has great benefits for a student’s home country.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Education is an important part of our lives. Studying abroad helps people to learn not only particular subjects
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allows them to be involved in a foreign culture. Some persons believe that a getting degree abroad has a positive impact on students’
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countries
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. Others disagree. I think
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that study abroad is, unambiguously, beneficial for student’s motherland.
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, while studying at a University, not only academic goals
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social can be achieved.
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, the current situation around Russia is not a pleasant one. And it is Russian policy itself, which generated
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reputation. A lot of foreigners treat Russia as an aggressive enemy
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because they are aware of Russia’s actions in the international arena.
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, the majority of Russians do not agree with the political activity we have. In
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case, I think, only personal contacts, acquaintance with Russian culture, and traditions will improve the reputation of the country in eyes of strangers.
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, graduating from a University abroad, getting up to date knowledge, and scientific contacts will stimulate
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of particular fields in leaps and bounds in students’
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grant for study in the USA, obliges beneficiaries after graduating from a University, return back to their
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and apply all the knowledge and skills they got for prospering their nations.
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grant policy provides subject
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with top-notched specialists. By and large, I find that studying abroad, learning from the experience of developed
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with people without any political background will have
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positive
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influence on students’
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A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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