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Some people think that the internet has brought people closer together, while others think that people and communities become more isolated. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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A major section of the society is of the opinion that online net access has brought communities nearer to each other,
however
, an equally strong lobby is of the opinion that individuals have become isolated due to
this
. I am of the view, that,
although
 access to information on any subject has become easier and quicker, people often tend to overlook the significance of interpersonal communication and
thus
 have become more secluded.
Firstly
,
internet
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 has opened up indefinite avenues of social interaction via various social networking sites.
For instance
, many among us are a part of some
or
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 the other group on websites like
facebook
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Facebook
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,
instagram
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,
whats
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 app etc. Texting messages on common interests has now become very common. Not only
this
, a plethora of information on all topics under the sun is available online, which keeps the society engaged and occupied.
On the other hand
, the extend of social interaction has decreased to a disturbingly low level. Wishing people online
instead
 of giving them a phone call is a common example of
this
 behaviour. Communities do not interact with each other in the manner they used to exchange information in days prior to the internet becoming popular. Instances of children wishing their parents on mother's day, father's day, their anniversaries or birthdays etc. has become an easy and convenient method of avoiding social responsibilities.
This
 is
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 the mental health of many and cases of disturbed personality issues is slowing
increadng
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increasing
 in the lives of people. To conclude, I believe that technology is supposed to make our lives simpler and comfortable,
however
,
on the contrary
 individuals and societies are now becoming
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 to
the
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technology.
Hence
, it is imperative to maintain a balance between living online and
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off line
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 to ensure that adequate social support systems are maintained.
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