Students at schools and universities learn far more from lessons with teachers than from other sources such as the internet, television. To what extent, do you agree or disagree with their opinion.

Due to the hefty digitalization
internet
,television has become a source of teaching and the
conventational
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conventional
method of teaching is on verge of extinction ,
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few individual believe that learning with the teacher has a great advantage .
This
essay disagrees with the statement as tutor's materials are limited to textbooks whereas the
internet
has a variety to teach the same thing in ten different way.
Firstly
,university professors and staff have limited time to give attention to any student.
Secondly
, Since the hectic schedule of classes, the majority of the time teenager's doubt never gets cleared and they need to be dependent on the
internet
or television to do their own research. A good example of
this
is a batch in
university
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that have 800 candidates it's very hard for any institution staff to clear each and every learner's doubt. In order to clear the knowledge ,gap one
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to take the help of the
internet
.We can not dissuade students to not use the
internet
as an infrastructure and facility to enhance the
curriculam
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curriculum
lack sometimes.
On the other hand
, the
Internet
also
adds an enormous amount of distraction,cyberbullying and misinformation into pupil's mind. The teachers of
institute
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are limited to textbooks and don't go overboard with the additional facts .For an instance ,class 6 to 12 knowledge is very theocratic and not based on
real-life
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scenario , school staffs are bound to teach only what's written on textbooks provided by state or central education system
in addition
internet
cause distraction to games ,videos, cinemas which can ruin one's concentration and mood to study and make them waste a lot of time. To conclude,every object have its pro and cons the
internet
give vast variety and access to learn anything whereas teacher makes students disciplined and make the session interactive .
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • personalized attention
  • immediate feedback
  • structured learning
  • curriculum
  • dynamic interaction
  • engagement
  • cognitive skills
  • access to expertise
  • specialists
  • comprehensive
  • progressively
  • digestible
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