Students at schools and universities learn far more from lessons with teachers than from other sources such as the internet, television. To what extent, do you agree or disagree with their opinion.

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Due to the hefty digitalization

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,television has become a source of teaching and the

conventational

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method of teaching is on verge of extinction ,

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few individual believe that learning with the teacher has a great advantage .

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essay disagrees with the statement as tutor's materials are limited to textbooks whereas the

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has a variety to teach the same thing in ten different way.

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,university professors and staff have limited time to give attention to any student.

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, Since the hectic schedule of classes, the majority of the time teenager's doubt never gets cleared and they need to be dependent on the

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or television to do their own research. A good example of

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is a batch in

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that have 800 candidates it's very hard for any institution staff to clear each and every learner's doubt. In order to clear the knowledge ,gap one

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to take the help of the

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.We can not dissuade students to not use the

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as an infrastructure and facility to enhance the

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lack sometimes.

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, the

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adds an enormous amount of distraction,cyberbullying and misinformation into pupil's mind. The teachers of

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are limited to textbooks and don't go overboard with the additional facts .For an instance ,class 6 to 12 knowledge is very theocratic and not based on

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scenario , school staffs are bound to teach only what's written on textbooks provided by state or central education system

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cause distraction to games ,videos, cinemas which can ruin one's concentration and mood to study and make them waste a lot of time. To conclude,every object have its pro and cons the

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give vast variety and access to learn anything whereas teacher makes students disciplined and make the session interactive .

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Students at schools and universities learn far more from lessons with teachers than from other sources such as the internet, television. To what extent, do you agree or disagree with their opinion.

Your opinion

Some people think foreign visitors should be charged more than local person when they visit the cultural and historical attractions in a country. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Universities and colleges are now offering qualifications through distance learning from the Internet rather than teachers in the classroom. Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

roads will be safer if cyclist pass exsam each year. to what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people believe older employees are more useful to a company. Others believe that younger employees are more useful in modern world. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Some people believe that professionals, such as doctors and engineers, should be required to work in the country where they did their training. Others believe they should be free to work in another country if they wish. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.