Students at schools and universities learn far more from lessons with teachers than from other sources such as the internet, television. To what extent, do you agree or disagree with their opinion.
Due to the hefty digitalization few individual believe that learning with the teacher has a great advantage .
internet
,television has become a source of teaching and the conventational
method of teaching is on verge of extinction ,Correct your spelling
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essay disagrees with the statement as tutor's materials are limited to textbooks whereas the internet
has a variety to teach the same thing in ten different way.
Firstly
,university professors and staff have limited time to give attention to any student. Secondly
, Since the hectic schedule of classes, the majority of the time teenager's doubt never gets cleared and they need to be dependent on the internet
or television to do their own research. A good example of this
is a batch in university
that have 800 candidates it's very hard for any institution staff to clear each and every learner's doubt. In order to clear the knowledge ,gap one Correct article usage
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internet
.We can not dissuade students to not use the internet
as an infrastructure and facility to enhance the curriculam
lack sometimes.
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On the other hand
, the Internet
also
adds an enormous amount of distraction,cyberbullying and misinformation into pupil's mind. The teachers of institute
are limited to textbooks and don't go overboard with the additional facts .For an instance ,class 6 to 12 knowledge is very theocratic and not based on Correct article usage
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real-life
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internet
cause distraction to games ,videos, cinemas which can ruin one's concentration and mood to study and make them waste a lot of time.
To conclude,every object have its pro and cons the internet
give vast variety and access to learn anything whereas teacher makes students disciplined and make the session interactive .Submitted by priyanka.bbc on
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