Recently , purchasing own consumption of
cars
has increased in countries and abundant Use synonyms
people
tend to have their privet Use synonyms
cars
. In my view , the demerits of Use synonyms
this
idea are more than Linking Words
the
merit. In the following Correct your spelling
they
essay
the negative and positive points will be discussed .
Appearing Add a comma
,essay
air
Use synonyms
pollution
as an environmental problem would be the most Use synonyms
power
full disadvantage of providing automobiles . Replace the word
powerful
Linking Words
Moreover
driving Add a comma
,Moreover
Use synonyms
car
decreases the public transportation used . Correct article usage
a car
Also
, Linking Words
harm
full fuel emissions which are generated byReplace the word
harmful
Add an article
the
Use synonyms
car
is known as the most reason for creating Add an article
the car
air
Use synonyms
pollution
. Use synonyms
For instance
, if a person is used to biking to work Linking Words
instead
of driving Linking Words
own
device , Correct pronoun usage
their own
his own
her own
air
will be more clear because any fuel is not produced. Use synonyms
Additionally
, the Linking Words
second
drawback of buying individual vehicles would be the fact that Linking Words
Correct your spelling
greenhouse
green house
gasses are created by carbon dioxide manufactured by automobiles . Correct your spelling
greenhouse
Also
, global warming Linking Words
are
Change the verb form
is
occured
because of Correct your spelling
occurred
Correct your spelling
greenhouse
green house
gasses generation that melts ices from Correct your spelling
greenhouse
surface
of rivers and ocean . Add an article
the surface
Furthermore
, many Linking Words
of
disasters can Change preposition
apply
be happened
. Change to the active voice
happen
For example
, Linking Words
Philippine
tsunami Correct article usage
the Philippine
that
had considerable environmental damages Correct pronoun usage
apply
such
as Linking Words
extinction
of some species in the ocean . Add an article
the extinction
There fore
, if the publics buy Correct your spelling
Therefore
Use synonyms
car
, they will have a Add an article
a car
the car
motivations
to use it rather than the public transportation that it would be harmless for Correct the article-noun agreement
motivation
environment
because of machines ' bad fuel produced and it makes Add an article
the environment
air
Use synonyms
pollution
and global warming .
Use synonyms
In
the other hand , the main advantage of taking the Change preposition
On
car
Use synonyms
owned
is the more Replace the word
ownership
people
use individual devices , the less spacious are destroyed in the natural environment. Apparently , when Use synonyms
people
do not have a Use synonyms
car
, they have to take Use synonyms
the
Correct article usage
apply
publics
vehicles . So , it needs enough space . Correct your spelling
public
For instance
, manufacturing Linking Words
Correct your spelling
railways
rail ways
in Correct your spelling
railways
subway
needs more spaces than Correct article usage
the subway
cars
. Use synonyms
Therefore
, development in Linking Words
the
public transportation can not be possible unless some natural environments are used and destroyed for the target .
In conclusion , in my view , despite the fact that some regions are omitted for planning new public devices because of increasing Correct article usage
apply
car
purchased ,it is harmless for Use synonyms
environment
. Because Add an article
the environment
,
the more Remove the comma
apply
people
drive Use synonyms
cars
, the more Use synonyms
air
Use synonyms
pollution
and global warming as Use synonyms
enviromental
issues will Correct your spelling
environmental
be appeared
.Change to the active voice
appear
have appeared
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